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Post by Shouri2 on Sat Oct 18, 2014 7:04 am

NOTE: I was getting bored so I decided to type this story...again. I started this story about one or two years ago, and I have typed some variations of it since. What is this story you may ask? Why, it's a DBZ Story! It follows all DBZ things like the movies, the specials and even GT. To put it simply, the story is a mix of them all with a touch of my imagination. The day I started this story was after reading countless stories. I was growing frustrated at how the DBZ world had a lot of plot holes that no one was able to make sense of. But then it happened. I sat on my bed for a while and thought of all the plot holes. I realized that I could fill the plot holes with common sense plus a calculator and other parts of DBZ. It started with me trying to make a SSJ Transformation Multiplier list. It was incredibly hard to find all the jigsaw pieces I needed but I managed. I'm getting off track so without further delay let's start our story with the disclaimer.

Disclaimer: I do not own DBZ, the creator of DBZ is Akira Toriyama.

Prologue:

There are some things in history that should never be tampered with, as doing so would destroy everything. Destiny when unraveled is empty. Such as Bardock's stand against Frieza, Goku's titanic battles with Vegeta and Frieza. A slight change would change everything. Such as the saiyans deciding to see if Bardock is right, and flying with him into space where they can use Power Ball to transform and transfer energy to Bardock who could have then defeated Frieza in his first form easily. The average power level of the saiyans was 1,200 and there were at least 3 thousand saiyans. The Oozaru transformation multiplies base powerlevel by ten, therefore 12,000 times 3000 is 36 million. Frieza's 3rd transformation (the one with the hover chair and armor) had 530,000 powerlevel. His 2nd had 1 million and his first had approximately from 1.2 mil to 1.5 mil. Finally his base form had 120 mil at full power. Frieza would not have had enough time to transform into his base form as Bardock would have killed him before he was at his first.

Ahem. Sorry about that, just needed to show how if the saiyans had decided to see if Bardock was right, the entire history of DBZ would have changed. For those who think that would have never happened as they were not THAT strong, think again. I made the variables as low as they could go on the Saiyan side. Frieza's side was already confirmed, and for those who think his max is 12 mil...It is impossible. Goku, even in Kaioken 4 was 4 times stronger than his base power in everything. Oozaru multiplies pl by 10 and Super Saiyan is obviously better than Oozaru. And Frieza specifically states that he had been using 1% of his power against Goku, which is 1.2 million. Of course, that is a bluff as he was probably using around 3% against him because Goku had a base powerlevel of 3 mil. I'll talk more about this in a separate topic. This is a story, not a World of Theories.

NOTE: I've decided I'm going to remake the Transformation Multiplier List. It's going to be tough, but I can't stand not telling about the DBZ stuff I know. By the way, the title of the story is meant to mean it's better than DB Kai as I don't like it at all. Where's the fun of DBZ if there is no blood or cool fillers? Quite honestly, DBZ is the only show whose fillers I actually enjoy as much as the main episodes, if not more.


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Post by Shouri2 on Mon Oct 20, 2014 3:06 pm

WARNING: THIS CHAPTER CONTAINS A LOT OF VIOLENCE. IN FACT, ALL MY CHAPTERS (OR MOST OF THEM) WILL BE VIOLENT. SO DON'T SAY I DIDN'T WARN YOU...

WARNING: I'M REALLY TELLING YOU, DO NOT READ IF YOU WANT TO READ SOMETHING PG-13. THIS IS NOT PG-13 (EVEN THOUGH I WATCHED DBZ UNCUT WHEN I WAS 5 DOESN'T MEAN OTHER PEOPLE DID). THIS. IS. SPARTA! (YET I'VE NEVER SEEN THE MOVIE IN WHICH THEY SAY THAT)

Chapter 1:

The planet Namek was on the verge of destruction. The Super Saiyan Goku had been tossed into lava, and he was most likely dead. Frieza the reptilian monster was laughing. Laughing at how he had managed to defeat the almighty super saiyan of legends. Gohan the son of the fallen warrior had sensed his father's ki disappear and set off to fight Frieza...alone.

As he flew to his destination, Gohan's thoughts were plagued with the deaths and suffering of everyone at the hands of Frieza. Piccolo was in a near death state and could die at any second because of the hole in his chest. Dende had been mercilessly killed by Frieza upon his final transformation, and Vegeta had been enslaved to the space tyrant since he was a child. The Namekians were so peaceful, yet he still slaughtered them like lambs in a butcher's shop. And Krillen was-

Flashbacks occurred in his mind, the memories still fresh. Frieza, choosing a warrior to kill like a game. Frieza, plunging his sharp horn into Krillen's chest. Frieza, licking Krillen's blood off his face with pleasure. Frieza, internally exploding Krillen even at the begging of Goku to stop. Frieza...Frieza!

He could hear the mad alien now, laughing uproariously. "Oh look. It's that little Saiyan brat. Hmph. The last of your race-and look at your face! Haha! Looking here and there for your sweet little daddy." He chuckled evilly, and leaned in close to Gohan's frozen face, as if telling a secret.

"I killed him." The words repeated in his head like a broken record. His previous thoughts came back full force, and Gohan could feel something start to snap. "Hehehe. And you came here to fight me? With you dead there will be no more monkeys left in my universe." Teeth gritting, hair lifting and aura surging, Gohan let out a ferocious yell as he launched himself at Frieza, hellbent on beating him up so bad he would fear the mere mention of a saiyan's name.

The tyrant was unaffected by the punches and kicks sent at him, and thought to himself 'Annoying apes. They come at me one after another. Ha, it's true then. Monkey see what monkey do'. Smirking madly Frieza started to retailiate, breaking bones and stopping organs with every attack.

The endurance of the saiyans still surprised him every time he saw them. What should have K.Oed any other person was nothing to them. Gohan, wanting to do SOMETHING to Frieza, spit on his eyes. Frieza yelled in shock, and Gohan took this chance to bite Frieza's tail and chew on it. His eyes popping out from shock and pain, Frieza swung around and around to get the monkey off of his precious tail. But Gohan bit harder in response. Gritting his teeth the reptilian alien pulled Gohan off his tail, and then used his tail to whip him on the back. With each strike, Gohan's cries of pain grew weaker and weaker until finally he stopped at the 91st strike. Wanting to make sure the kid stayed dead, Frieza snapped Gohan's neck and hugged him so hard his back cracked. Still not satisfied and seeking revenge for the spit in his eyes, Frieza pulled out all his nails and teeth one by one. Doing this brought some response from the near dead saiyan half breed. 'STILL alive?!' Frieza thought incredulously. Gohan was being powered only by the thought of his friend's deaths, otherwise he would have given up and died.

Feeling his anger reach dangerous levels, Frieza screamed "WHY WON'T YOU JUST DIE?!" Bringing his fist back, he plunged it into Gohan's abdomen, going all the way through. Then he threw him into the air and shot blast after blast at him in anger.

After 5 minutes, the tyrant checked Gohan's pulse.

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Gohan was dead... His eyes were completely blank, unseeing and unfeeling. His body hung loosely as Frieza held him by his neck, blood pouring from every inch. Chuckling at how most of his kills were of bald people lately, Frieza decided to cut off all of Gohan's hair. Not that it made him look worse. In fact, it was a major improvement from the hair he had before. Feeling annoyed at this fact, Frieza decided to finish the half saiyan off before he made him get a heart attack from too much anger.

The half breed was thrown into the lava, where he would never be able to escape and would die...

Author's Note: I wrote the chapter on my android on Wordpad, and this is a revised version of it with more details. I know that all of you thought at one point of time "How is he...still alive?!" The answer is simple. Saiyans have big hearts, and they have high tolerance. Just look at Goku after the battle with Vegeta. Gohan has both of those things and he has the emotions of a human. He has the thought of revenge fueling him, and as a lot of you probably know, revenge is one of the most powerful fuels you can use. Also, I was thinking of the muscle memory Rock Lee in Naruto has. I thought Saiyans have that too, but they have it naturally.

If someone can survive being squashed by Oozarus falling on them or squeezing them, or from spikes in every limb then being electrified, or getting all the energy sucked out, then Gohan can survive this...maybe...possibly...
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Re: Dragon Ball Supreme

Post by Toopher2 on Tue Oct 21, 2014 6:22 pm

To long... Shorten it...I can't read you know!
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Re: Dragon Ball Supreme

Post by Shouri2 on Wed Oct 22, 2014 8:16 am

No can do. It's too short as it is. Now I'm gonna work on next chapter. By the way, There is one more reason why Gohan did not die. Two words. PLOT ARMOR
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Post by Shouri2 on Wed Oct 22, 2014 2:55 pm

Chapter 3:

In his last few moments of life, Gohan felt few things. He could feel the lava burning away at his body, he could feel the pain of Frieza's attacks, and he could feel the coldness of failure and death envelope him. -Daddy...I miss you daddy...- Gohan thought, now starting to feel his abnormally large heart stop...for good. His heart had already nearly stopped many times after Frieza's brutal attacks, but it couldn't handle the pain much longer. There was so much pain that he couldn't feel it. His brain wouldn't allow him to or else his fragile child mind would break from the pressure. The lack of pain was another major factor in why he wasn't dieing.

The half saiyan closed his eyes, reminiscing about his many friends. From the animals he met, to Dende. All of them were good friends. But they would feel sad if he died. After all, he felt sad when Mister Piccolo died, and he didn't want them to feel that pain. -I- need more-POWER!- Gohan thought, forcing his body to power up for the hundredth time. The sheer joy Frieza had in torturing Gohan made him realize something. He had already realized it before, but personally experiencing it made it clear. Frieza was pure evil, and he had to be stopped before the whole universe was under his thumb! Before everyone would be tortured in front of each other. -I won't let him any MORE!-

Gohan's angry blank eyes open, and he lets out a primal scream of power that pushes away all the lava. It flies up into the air, swirling around the enraged half alien while blue thunder rumbles in the black clouds above. Blue lightning strikes Gohan, yet nothing happens to him. A golden aura appears, which along with the swirling lava-lightning is really cool. Suddenly, all the wounds Gohan got heal, which diminishes the aura's power, but then it is powered up again back to normal. His hair is back in his preferred spiky long version, and his teeth as well as his nails have regrown to be better than ever. His organs, which were visible because of the wounds, start working properly again. With another primal roar, Gohan blitzes/shoots/synonym better than them to Frieza.

He looks like a rotating drill with his gold aura, swirling red lava and electrcity. Speaking of, another bolt hits Gohan, who gets even faster and buries a punch into Frieza's abdomen. Frieza chokes in pain, saliva and blood spraying like a mist from his mouth. He gasps for air, however he soon chokes again, this time out of fear. For right in front of him is a Super Saiyan Gohan. For an instant, he sees the ghost of Super Saiyan Goku, and Bardock behind Gohan. That instant is gone because by the next instant Gohan is on the offensive. His attacks are similar in strength to Frieza, and they are just the tiniest bit weaker. Frieza regains his senses and fights a battle not unlike the one with Goku. After 10 seconds, which is about 3 episodes for us (at least), they seperate and look each other in the eyes.

To Gohan's confusion, Frieza has a smirk on his face. He vanishes with an after image and appears behind Gohan before chopping him in the back of the neck. Instant K.O. Glancing to the side, Frieza is not surprised to see an angry Super Saiyan Goku. Figuring it would save him some pain, he threw Gohan at him. Goku caught his son and put him down in a safe spot before cracking his knuckles and neck. Time for the REAL fight to begin! Goku vs Frieza! In the next episode! Of Dragon! Ball! Z!

NOTE: I am not that good in fight scenes, but just replace Goku with Gohan and you got the mental image for their fight. Also, as a reminder to myself, I'm gonna type this here. txen si ton txen. eton eht z. on s.

If you understood that, congrats. Now excuse me while I go have my beauty sleep. Btw, I finally did this in Notepad


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Post by Shouri2 on Thu Oct 23, 2014 10:10 am

NOTE: I hate to post multiple times in a row, but it has to be done for the sake of the story. I've decided I'm going to explain some things in my NOTES like how Gohan survived and why did he get K.Oed that quickly. If you can recall, GT Kid Goku could only maintain the SSJ3 transformation for a few seconds. If he were an adult it would be much longer. If he had a tail like he does later, it would be much longer. Then in the Hyberbolic Time Chamber or Room of Time and Space, Gohan holds the SSJ2 state for barely 1 second. Note that by that point he was really tired from 20 hours of constant training, and if you go to the Dragonball Wikia page on Super Saiyan, you can see more about exhaustion being a part in transformations. Anyways, Gohan's base power was not that high as compared to Goku. I would put him to be about 1.8 million and Vegeta at 2 mil. 1.8 mil x 50 = 90 mil which is slightly weaker than Frieza who is tired by this point. Gohan was focusing too much on sustaining the rage and the power, thus he did not notice Frieza use his after image.

Chapter 4:

So many months have passed since that day...the day planet Namek exploded into dust. At first, the Z Fighters thought Goku was dead, but later on they found out that he was alive but wanted to stay in space for a while. Gohan was sad at this, but wondered what piqued his dad's naturally immense curiosity. Knowing him, he was probably stuffing his face full and learning a new technique. Gohan hadn't let up on his training even when he was studying. He had gotten so strong over the past few years that he wasn't used to weak objects such as pencils anymore. He could easily adjust his power in his base state, but it was very hard to do so in his SSJ form. To even use it again was difficult. It was only when Gohan was training in a Gravity Room at night because of a nightmare that it happened. He was on 100x Earth's gravity, but he accidently told the machine to make it 400x. Instantly he was on the floor, feeling like Frieza was gigantic and crushing his entire body. He couldn't move, he couldn't move! -Someone please help!-

But after no one came to his aid, he thought -No! They always come and help me and get hurt in the process! While I stay safe and on the sidelines like a baby. I can't...I can't...I CAAAAAAN'T!- The transformation came, and with it he felt the pressure lessen enough for him to croak "Normal gravity".

After this incident, he tried to stay in the form, fearing what it would take for him to use it again. Some problems were that he got easily angered and being around Gohan was now even more dangerous than being inside an active volcano. At least the volcano doesn't have eyes so fierce they can nearly kill.

In the present, Gohan was doing his work again in SSJ Form. His mother had commented that his hair tone, texture, alignment etc changed with each passing day. The mini warrior noticed it as well as the lessened strain of SSJ and the softer aura. He felt sad for Vegeta, who trained so hard every day yet he couldn't become SSJ. In Gohan's opinion, any person who trains that hard deserves it. Well, any person other than a evil person of course. Anyways, the pencil he was using snapped as he suddenly felt a familiar presence...alongside an even stronger one?! This was not a good presence. No, it was Frieza!

Ever since he had come back from Namek, he had talked with his mom a lot. It was now finally at the point that he could go outside to train, only if he studied that is. So quickly telling his mother of the news, he shot off in Saiyan Battle Armor. The place he arrived at was similar to the place where Goku and Vegeta fought before. The Z Fighters were there, and they tensed at feeling a strong power suddenly arrive in their midst. With Gohan's now 24/7 golden hair and tail along with his teal eyes and Saiyan Battle Armor, they nearly didn't recognize him. But at the sound of his voice they realized it was Gohan. There was no time for hugs and news to be exchanged, however.

A familiar spaceship broke through the clouds, landing smoothly at a spot close to them. Exiting it were some soldiers, a weird robotic Frieza and a huge second stage person of his race. From their advanced senses, the Z Fighters could make out that the person next to Frieza, who was stronger than the evil tyrant, was his father! Gohan gulped, imagining the power of the titan in his base form. It would be more than a hundred times stronger than the power he had now, that's for sure. The Z Fighters were shocked as they saw a purple haired warrior arrive in a spectacular killing of the henchmen. Mecha Frieza scanned the warrior, laughing at the dismal 5 listed.

Smirking, the warrior trash talked with the cyborg before becoming A SUPER SAIYAN?! What followed was one of the most one sided fights ever. Frieza, with a look of extreme fear and insanity on his face, was no match for the calm and collected warrior. To Gohan's relief, Frieza was double quartered and then blasted to particles, while King Cold didn't get a chance to revert to a stronger form. The hidden spectators tensed when the warrior reverted and then looked in their direction with that saiyan face. What would he do to them? Find out on the next episode, of DRAGON! BALL! S!

NOTE: *Whistles waiting for someone to realize what I said and meant before*


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Post by Shouri2 on Wed Oct 29, 2014 11:54 am

NOTE: My laptop broke and I had to fix it. It’s finally fixed and it also has TONS of Microsoft stuff now. The story is now a file on my laptop…I am so proud!

Chapter 5:

Quite slowly the warrior walked towards the frozen group without shifting his gaze from the golden haired boy in the midst. It seemed like hours passed, but in reality it was only a few seconds before he was staring down Gohan. The emotions he felt were not shown on his face except for a flicker of pain in his eyes. Memories fought to emerge, yet their efforts were for naught as the trained fighter repressed them with a practiced ease. Gohan on the other hand was wondering what this person was up to. He felt no worry as he had the unique ability to read people like an open book even if they were closed. He could tell this person meant no harm at all.

Suddenly the warrior turned SSJ and swung his sword down with an eerie whistle of air. The 24/7 SSJ did not flinch nor move in any way which made the swordsman stop barely a millimeter away from Gohan’s nose. A silent conversation was passed while the rest of the gang were trembling from the adrenaline stored inside. They had been sure of their imminent death at the hands of this new person and it was a major relief to see he stopped.

Multiple swings of the sword ensued without stopping at all. Gohan merely used an aura-covered finger to deflect all the attacks until finally their auras clashed and burst like lava. At the sound of something descending from space they stopped and the sword wielder reverted back to base. A space pod crashed into the earth with a great impact but it didn’t stop the gathered crowd from rushing to meet this new arrival. As expected it was Goku in a weird matador-like outfit. It was then that Trunks, as they learned was his name, started to explain to Goku and Gohan a few kilometers away of the situation.

Apparently Trunks was from an Apocalyptic future, ravaged by the merciless androids constructed by the evil scientist Dr. Gero from the Red Ribbon Army. In three years time on 10:00 am of May 12th on Amenbo Island, the androids will appear and start their reign of terror. The Z Fighters fight bravely but fall to their deadly attacks. With Piccolo gone Kami dies leaving the earth dragonless. Goku dies before the fight due to an alien heart virus which Gohan also catches. Gohan’s heart virus is different as it does not kill but it puts the victim in incredible pain every second. Usually the victim would die of the pain alone or attempt suicide. But not Gohan…

Not Gohan, the first Mystic Half Saiyan Half Human with mastered Super Saiyan.

Not Gohan the one who the world is counting on.

Not Gohan the protector of the innocent and vanquisher of the dark.

Not Gohan who survived Frieza’s inhumane torture…

And definitely not Gohan who seeks to pay back the androids for all the lives they have ruined!

The Armageddon the future is in prevents Gohan from ever leaving it behind. But he did… Son Gohan the strongest man on Earth died after over 13 years of fighting the two perfectly synchronized Androids with only one arm and a virus causing unimaginable pain every second. The way Trunks described Gohan was very awe inspiring and it was obvious that Gohan was his best friend, big brother and father all in one before his death. After handing over the medicine for the viruses and revealing his shocking origins, it is time for Trunks to leave the past. Will Earth’s Special Forces be strong enough to face the Apocalyptic Armageddon coming? Will Vegeta please stay in that hilarious pink shirt?? Will I just shut up and let you go peacefully? Not likely. Find out the answer to your questions in the next episode of DRAGON! BALL! SUPREEEEEME!
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Post by Gogeta2222 on Sun Nov 09, 2014 10:28 pm

I see what you did there... :
Will Earth’s Special Forces be strong enough to face the Apocalyptic Armageddon coming?
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Post by Shouri2 on Thu Nov 13, 2014 12:31 pm

Sometimes it's really obvious and other times you have to be in Captain Ginyu's famous pose to notice it. I'm already several chapters ahead but I've been busy with life, life, and what a surprise! More life... Currently trying to watch all DBZ Uncut Episodes but it's somewhat hard when Youtube stops working for no reason. Got till the Global Training episode though. About 280 more episodes to go!
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Post by Gogeta2222 on Thu Nov 13, 2014 8:01 pm

YouTube Glitch Fix:

Step 1:
Get a music file,

Step 2:
Restart Computer,

Step 3:
Open the music file BEFORE you open anything else,

Step 4:

Pause it,

Step 5:

That SHOULD fix it! Very Happy
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Post by Shouri2 on Fri Nov 14, 2014 10:33 am

I tried watching on Youtube again yesterday and it worked though it kept buffering every 5 to 10 seconds. I was forced to stop half way as patience is one of my virtues but even I know when something is a lost cause. I'll try again right now. I heard that it gets slow because there are lots of other people watching on Youtube. My Wi-Fi isn't slow either, so the only other thing that may be the problem is that I use a proxy to watch Youtube videos.
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Post by Vegito9000 on Wed Nov 19, 2014 5:51 am

Wow, Nice story O.o Hate I never noticed it before!
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